Yet, it bothers you somehow to get anything else from this image besides an uncorrect focusing. This is what you notice first and what you write as your comment below the photograph. Well, to me photography is not about focusing properly a model. That's something much more and it has nothing to do with technical skils of the photographer or of the camera they used or the quality of the photograph (that I most of the time destroy on purpose by the way.)
Not at all! I've seen your work in portraiture to undersatnd better your point and I think we have completely different theories in this issue. Anyway, I am not going to comment on your art and telling you I can't feel much from your portraits while looking at them although they are very well focused and especially eyes.